‘’THE GAME’’ has been one of the strangest films I have watched so far. It’s montage is very interesting also very attractive. Events which are not real are entirely ‘a game’ which Nichola’s brother ‘Conrad’ planned for as a birth gift. Even if the events are seemed like real, of course they are not real.
In the film, Nichola’s brother planned delibaretely a game. Actually I think that everything happening in the film is clear and absurd. For example; an announcer who was announcing news suddenly started to answer Nichola’s words and questions. Besides, The announcer started to imitate Nichola’s behaviours. When Nichola tried to break down television, he couldn’t break down it. What is more, there was interesting clown in Nichola’s home. This clown is very weird because it crossed continuously him as it is one of the games’ parts. Furthermore, Nichola met with a Ms. Waiter in restourant. This woman was strange because of her interesting behaviours. Nichola came across like casual actually it was deliberate. One of the game’s parts is that Nicholas saw dead waiter boy on root of the restourant. But after, same boy waiter gave bill to Nichola.
As you know, the game is very interesting and not real. The game is very clear. Because events which happened during the film are not confidence. But unfortunately, Nichola couldn’t understand it whether a game or not. So, he was terrified and his life changed. As a conclusion, the game is A GAME!
Fatma KARACA
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Hi Fatma;
YanıtlaSilYou said ''Game is a game''. You meant any game was a game ? I couldn't get it because you said ''the game is very interesting and not real'' upper. So it looks like a dilemma to me.
On body paragraph you showed proof to your idea, I guess. I think it should have been clearer but still not bad. (Bengi)
Cansel ISLEK
YanıtlaSilYou have really good ideas but they are in utter confusion. I propose you to separate them and make two or three body paragraphs. If you separate them you can improve your ideas.
Do you state that it is a real game or that is not a real game? You have a lot of contradictions.
But all in all you have good voice!
hi fatma!
YanıtlaSilin the first paragraph you must use 'and' before 'also' the only mistake which ı found in this essay is it.
However, you have contradictions while explaining your thoughts. ı couldn't understand enough what you wanted to say while explaining your ideas. You should clarify these. thats all.. BÜŞRA ÇALIŞKAN