ALTERNATIVE MEDICINE
Alternative medicine is a way of recovering by using natural herbs. We can call it as nonconventional medicine.
Nonconventional medicine must be second choice for a patient. Because in nonconvetional medicine there aren’t enough data and reasons aren’t usually known for the disease. And this should be used as a supporter of conventional medicine with the allowance of doctor.
Sometimes since lack of data and other things people can suffer a lot of pain. And also it sometimes even can cause the death of people.
Why do people believe or choose this way? What are the reasons? The reasons can be social and cultural or pyschological. Social and cultural reasons are suchs as low level of understanding of science, increasing amount of opposite science or disliking biomedical methods.Pyshcological reasons are such as believing desire, assimilating to the community and prejudices to conventional medicine.
As a result it can be used but not always.
Instead of the word ''data'', it'd be better to use the word ''knowledge''.
YanıtlaSilOn the forth paragraph, you don't have to use ''such as'' because before ''such as'' there must be a sentence. I've never seen a sentence as you wrote.
Still, you wrote a nice essay.
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Cansel İŞLEK
YanıtlaSilWe can ALSO call it nonconventional medicine.
In your second paragraph you could talk about the wakeness of an information. You can also mention that the knowledge is not based on any proofs!
Why do you separate the second and th third paragraph? I think they belong together.
You could ımprove your conclusion part!