3 Ocak 2011 Pazartesi

BIG COMPANIES(OKAN)

BIG CORPORATIONS
           
            In our world, today, there are many big companies that gain a lot of from the public. To show their good side to public, they donate money to some charaties or they give their corporations’ name to an organization.
            Some of the corporations do such things really thinking to help but others only want to be more popular. I think if a corporation wants to help anything, it can be done silently. For instance; in my hometown there is a club which is combined by rich people who have big companies. They supply necessary items for students with the help of municipality. So their names are kept. Because, they don’t want to be popular. Their aim is clear. But some corporations do this in front of the media. Of course they help someone but why it is done in front of media. Or big corporations do this help to have tax break. In many countries, there is a law that if a company support an organization financially they don’t have to pay tax that how much the corporation give. And also doing this job in front of media, they want to attract the people to come and buy some items from them. For example, in my country people are sensitive to help the poor. When they see something like this they go there and buy something from them so that they can help the poor.
            If the main purpose is helping to the poor, it must be done silently.

1 yorum:

  1. Hello Okan,
    I'll begin to say two things that stick in my mind.
    'So their names are kept ''private'' '. This would be the correct sentence.
    In this sentence I think you should use a question mark. ''Of course they help someone but why it is done in front of media''
    You did a nice work except for these.
    You used punctuation marks and while I was reading it, nothing made me confused.
    (Bengi)

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